Couple of years ago we had gone for a drive outside the city. It was a semi village semi town like area, near the railway station……with farm fields nearby.
And there were yellowish tall buildings. They actually had a flood the previous year and it was bad!!
The ground floors of all the buildings got submerged under water and had water marks on the walls. Scary!
Suddenly after all these years I remembered the buildings……….and what might have been the story of the apartments.
But I think things are much better now economically, with builders buying lands from the locals and constructing highrisers.
The houses look a lot like the image I found somewhere on google.
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Teeny tiny wet drizzles,
Yet the sun glares on the land like a swizzle.
Hustling and bustling on the nearby railway tracks,
All in all its a bright damp day at the shacks.
Monotonous chores, monologue dreams around the clock,
Same old rusty garage and dusty market down the block.
Stained old pink sofas and socks on the floor,
Mamma rattling the utensils in the cramped kitchen, hoping for some windfall at the door.
Elder sister hiding the poverty under layers of powder,
Trying to hit it off with the guy at the garage who works as her dad’s junior.
Little sister prepping hard for the maths test next day,
She knows its the only way.
Bagging a job, getting a status and making it big,
Its no easy gig, one wrong step and everything could crumble like a twig.
Garage owner’s daughter says that poor get a job, gets disillusioned by money and spread corruption,
Maybe, but the rich too are no exclusion, creating their own disruption.
But she’s going to be one of a kind,
Helping herself and the blind.
And when everything seems peachy and creamy,
She’ll take off on a holiday to a land filled with cherry.
That’s all folks,
Bye bye
Mithai
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Beautiful landscape Mithai! x
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Its from google. I took it because of the cherries.☺
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Taking me on a journey again huh 🙂
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Glad you thought so!☺☺
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^.^/
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Well done. You amaze me.
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Thank you so much!! 😀 I’m grateful you think so 😀
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The poem is so touching…harsh reality! Well-penned…
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Thank you so much! I wanted to write something different☺☺
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Good to see that Mithai is discovering a poet in herself. I wish the Garage Owner’s daughter Good Luck 🙂
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Thank you Mohsin, it was fun trying something different ☺☺
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Beautiful Landscapes love ❤️
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Thank you, I got them off google!☺☺
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You have a great eye all the more
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Thank you hon, have a great day ❤❤
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Those buildings look rather solid…but said to hear that they have been flooded. Lovely poem to go with the photos. Sometimes some of us have it hard and do what we have to do to make a better life in this world. Take every opportunity and hope for the best. Love how you ended the poem with ‘a land filled with cherry’. That must be a very, very sweet land 🙂
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Yeah I tried to find from Google an image that looks nearest to the buildings I saw. They were pretty solid and seeing the water marks rising to such high levels was scary!
Absolutely, we should always thrive for a better life no matter what the conditions are ☺☺
Thank you so much for going through my poem and leaving behind such kind words ☺☺ Land of cherry does seems to be a tempting place to take a break❤❤
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Loved the poem Mithai – it made me smile 🙂 and I agree with Mabel… a land of cherry; just add chocolate Mmmmm. 🙂
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Thank you for the appreciation 😊😊 Yep completely agree, chocolate will be like the cherry on top lol 😁😁
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That is a touching story , smith! I You
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Oops! Hit a wrong key. Lovely poem 🙂
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Thank you so much Amy!😊😊 These days I too am hitting the wrong button and sending half written messages lol, something’s in the air 😁😁
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😊💖
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This is such a beautiful poem !! I totally loved it 💜 beautifully described 😄
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Thank you so much Prerna!! Truly means a lot 😊😊 Have a great day buddy. Hugs ❤❤
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My pleasure 🙂
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Intresting n stirred poem with wonder ful images.my new friend !!u r welcome.where is dis place?plz reply.
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Thank you so much for your kind words!😊😊 I got the image from Google, somewhere in Brazil.
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Wonderful images.thanks n welcome.
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Lots of best wishes!☺☺
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Most welcome dear.💙
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The flooding added a serious element to this post.
A poem about simple country life. . .This was simply lovely and added some fun in the land with cherry, what a helpful person taking care of herself and the Blind!
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Thank you Robin for liking it☺☺ It was a very chaotic situation after the floods, the families has to move to the higher floors.
Hope you are having a wonderful weekend ☺☺
Hugs ❤❤
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A nice poem! And I’m glad the building is okay since it went under water!
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Thank you so much Christy!☺
In some buildings the water level was even higher. The families had to move to the higher floors. A very chaotic situation!
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Yikes! Hopefully everything is calmer now.. Take care!
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Yes I hope so too☺☺
You too take care ❤❤
Xoxo
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Nicely done, you dessert us in the end. 🙂
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Thank you, maybe I should have ended with, ‘And she got a job in Charlie and the Chocolate Factory’ lol. That would have been a tastier dessert!☺☺
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Lovely words and story behind the concept is hearty.
Keep Smiling.
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Thank you so much for your kind words☺☺
Have a wonderful day!!
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What a journey through words.
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Thank you so much Jacqueline, glad you liked it 😘😘❤❤
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Nice BLOG!!! ADD my BLOG too!!! Kisses!!!
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Thank you so much!😊😊 Sure visiting right over☺☺
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Beam me up to the land filled with cherry! 🙂 🙂 I liked your poem, and thank you for your visit.
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Haha with the heat we are having here, land of mangoes also wouldn’t be too bad!!😊😊
Thank you so much for visiting, I loved your blog too!!☺☺ Happy weekends❤❤
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Nice BLOG ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you so much!☺☺
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Comment my photo!!!! Kisses ❤ ❤ ❤
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It’s been awhile. this is really a nice one.
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Thank you so much Kathleen!❤❤ Have a wonderful week ahead☺☺
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Reblogged this on dereve77.
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Thank you so much!☺☺ Welcome to the blog ☺☺
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SUPER!
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Thank you so much!! Wishing you a wonderful week ahead ☺☺
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This made me think, great words, my brother is in his 3rd year of a 4 year degree and he’s started to wonder what’s next and look for internships etc, wondering and worrying about the future is something as a musician I try not to do 🌸🌸🌸
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You are right. Worrying about the future never helps. Rather improving the present and strengthening the base sorts out everything ☺☺
Best of luck for your music, you are already on a high! I love reading your articles and looking at the pictures ❤❤
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Thanks Mithai 💕 love your posts too xx
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Thank you so much!!❤❤ Happy weekends 😊😊
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Loved it.. Did the image of the building made yu to write this?
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Yes exactly!! How did you know??
Its was a faded yellow building standing tall on a sunny yet cloudy day. Such a powerful scene.
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Well.. I am still wondering how yu came up with this poem with that image. It is deep and beautifully written. :’)
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Thanks a lot Ramesh! Means lots coming from one of the most interesting poets I know☺
The building looked very rustically beautiful. Almost abandoned isolated to live its own charm. And I just made up, what must the life be on a day inside the building.
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Thank you. Mithai 🙂 Oh. A tale from my memory. This post is all about imagination and creativity. :’)
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Thank you! I’m truly honored you think so☺☺
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Trust that you are doing well. 🙂
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Well there have been some changes. Going to sleep at 10. Or latest by 12. And good morning at 7. How crazy is that??
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Oh.. Haha.. That’s a huge change. So I believe you are done with your college lyf for the moment then.. 😀
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Semester still to go but then that’s not something we talk about 😂😂
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Haha. Okay. 🙂
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It just brings back the terror of realizing that I don’t even know the name of the subjects yet, let alone the syllabus
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Well.. But you end up getting very good GPA.. So I won’t believe in this story. 😛
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On some other semester maybe but in this one, we only aim to get through 😊😊
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Hows everything going with you??
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I wish I could say great but down with fever from afternoon.. :’)
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I’m so sorry to hear that!! Its the weather, having similar issue with me also, a very tiring headache.
I hope you get better soon, hot tea with ginger might help, that’s what I’m having.
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Thank you and You too.. 🙂
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Thank you so much. Hope you are feeling better now!
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Better than yesterday.. Thanks for asking. 😊
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I’m glad to hear that. Hope you get perfectly fit soon and post something!!!!
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Yeah for sure.. I trust that yu are sipping tea only for enjoyment not as a remedy :’)
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We are going through our own battle buddy. But tea helps.
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It was not meant to be sarcastic. :’)
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I’m not being either.
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Oh. Okay. 🙂
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Hi, I know that you’ve been a regular on my blog, but I want to thank you for the follow. I wish you well as a software engineer. Take care now.
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Thanks a lot. You too take care and have a great weekend ☺☺
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smiling to such
a happy
ending/beginning 🙂
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Thank you so much!!☺☺ Hope the weekend was fun, best wishes for the week ahead☺☺
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Je vous souhaite une semaine merveilleuse, plein d’amour et de bonheur, mon cher ami.
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Reblogged this on Orthometry.
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Thank you so much!!☺☺ And welcome to my blog 😊😊
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Have a sweet and wonderful week, Mithai!! Hugs xo 💐💞
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Thank you so much Robin!! Hope you had an enjoyable weekend and a fun week ahead 😊😊❤❤
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I have had a busy week but no complaints! Hope you have a fantastic weekend, dear Mithai. 🙂 ❤
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Thanks a lot Robin. I hope you are letting your hair down and planning for a fun weekend too ☺☺
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Aww, you’re so sweet. It is nice to have heard this. I will keep this in mind, letting my hair down. Thanks, Mithai. 🙂 xo
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Thanks a lot!!😊😊 Have a great day and a wonderful week ☺☺
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Thank you dear, a rose to you too ☺☺
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Beautifully written poem about this village.
And the girl who wishes to escape and find a better life for herself.
May she find that land filled with cherry.
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Thank you so much Chris!! I too hope she finds the cherry land.☺☺
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I hope you’re enjoying life now that your exams are over. 🙂
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Not yet over but soon!! I’m excited and looking forward to it 😊😊
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Then you’ll find time to walk in the rain and look for beautiful lamps with beautiful antique iron handles. 😀 😀
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Yess someday definitely! Has to be 😊😊
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Hi there, Mithai. Enjoy and hope all is well dear! Smiles, Robin
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Hello Robin!! That you for checking on, college finishing soon😊😊
Love and hugs and a wonderful weekend ❤❤
Take care
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So glad you will be moving into profession without juggling college, Mithai, too. 😚 You have had quite a lot on your shoulders, dear. 💟💞
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I still haven’t joined any job actually. I got the offer letters and is supposed to join after I’ve officially finished my degree ☺☺ But college was tough nevertheless. Even though I chilled to the level of infinity in this one last year of college 😊😊
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A beautiful and touching poem. Thanks for taking me along.
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Thank you so much for coming along ☺☺ Have a fantastic weekend!!
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I hope you are well, Mithai. Have you finalized your plans for after graduation or will you be taking the summer off? I’m sure you have loads of great options, and a big future in store. I wish you all things good. ❤ ❤ ❤
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Hi Anna. I hope you are good ☺☺
Graduation is soon, even though still a few major exams ahead.
Yes I’ve made plans about what I’m gonna be doing after that…… its quite radical actually, fingers crossed 😊😊 I’ll speak more about it after I graduate…..I hope it works out ☺☺
Thank you for checking up on me, I’m eagerly waiting to do another blog post❤❤
Have a great week, love you😘😘
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Bonsoir ou bonjour
Une belle amitié
C’est deux mains sur un clavier
Le passage sur un profil
Une image que l’on dépose
Sur une personne que l’on apprécie
De quelqu’un gentil et sage
On dépose des petits mots bien placés
Dans ce joli petit monde
Moi je suis toujours là pour faire sourire
Et cela me fait toujours plaisir
Au fond de mon coeur
Je t’offre ce bonheur
Je te dis bonne nuit ou bonjour
gros bisous
Bernard
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Bonjour cher Bernard, comment avez-vous été? C’était un calendrier assez difficile pour moi. Mais je vous remercie énormément d’avoir pris un temps précieux pour me rendre visite et laisser derrière moi un doux poème. Cela me fait sentir mieux 🙂 J’espère que tout va être fantastique pour votre cher ami, je vous souhaite une bonne nuit 🙂
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Wow… That description was amazing! Look at your English…👏
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Hows everything going with you buddy?? Its the campusing time! I’m sure you are rocking it 😊😊
And thank you for the appreciation, it was just random and nothing special lol 😊😊
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Everything’s great! Done with 3rd year and recruitment trainings will be starting soon… And blogging had a long pause so I need to resume it soon now.
How is it going with you? Working with some mnc? Or implement your own ideas?
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Well its going quite exciting for me too 😆😆
I received the joining date of the first company.
But I didn’t take it😊😊
I’m actually implementing my own ideas, just concentrating on the business for now.
Joining for the 2nd company is supposed to come soon…..I’m still deciding what to do…..I might take that up….but I’m not sure……kinda still thinking it out but really enjoying working on my business 😊😊
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That’s amazing! Congratulations… 😄😄
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Thank you 😀😀
And best of luck to you👍👍
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Bonjour ou bonsoir
S’il existe un sentiment
Pas toujours perçu a sa juste valeur, c’est bien l’amitié
Elle est beaucoup plus sincère et profonde
Que la simple camaraderie
Redonne souvent de l’espoir quand la vie est difficile
L’amitié ne s’épanouit de respect et d’honnêteté
Voila donc pourquoi, jouir de ton amitié
D’une personne comme toi, est un immense privilège
Que rien au monde ne serait remplacer
Je te souhaite une belle et agréable journée ou soirée
Je te fais de Gros Bisous.
Bernard
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Cher Bernard, toujours une journée brillante pour entendre mon ami. Tous vos poèmes m’ont apporté le bonheur et la joie. Je chéris votre amitié et j’espère le chérir pendant de nombreuses années. Je vous souhaite un dimanche extraordinaire mon ami.
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Hey, this is a beautiful poem…:-) It reflects a good number of households in today’s world where getting money means everything.
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Thank you so much love😊😊 I’m glad you liked it ☺☺
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❤ ⭐ ❤
⭐ ❤ ⭐
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❤❤😘😘
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Bonsoir ou bonjour
Tiens je pense à toi
Aux gentils messages que tu m’apportes sur mon blog
C’est comme un rayon de soleil
Ceux-ci me mettent du bleu au cœur et celui-ci resplendit de joie
Quel bonheur que tu me donnes
Que de joie j’éprouve
Je tiens à te remercier
Belle journée ou belle soirée
Bisous Bernard
Un Peu De Tendresse
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Wonderful writing…
Keep blogging, ‘would love to read them..😊😊
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Thank you so much friend, means a lot 😊😊
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Hi. No matter what background we all have some things in common. Take care.
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Hello, how have you been?? Hope everything is going great with you. I’m sorry for the late reply, have been extremely caught up for sometime.
You are absolutely right.
I believe rich poor, different countries, this generation or previous generations, some things are always common and never change ☺☺
You too take care and have a great day 😊😊
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I like that 😊
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Hi sorry for the late reply!! Hope everything is going well with you☺☺
Thanks a lot for visiting, means a lot😊😊
Have a great day😀😀
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Follow me if you like my blog
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Sure buddy!
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Amazing! It’s a mesmerising one..
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Thank you so much Akshay!! Very glad you liked it 😊😊
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Nice story. Seems the land is an art from God.
Also thanks for visiting hhhigh.
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Thanks a lot dear friend!! Was a pleasure visiting, going for a visit once again 😀😀
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Hi there, Mithai! Thanks for liking my posts and hanging out. Hugs, Robin xo 💐 💕
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Always a pleasure Robin😊😊
Hugs to you too gorgeous friend 😘😘
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Thanks for the mini mental vacation!
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I’m glad you enjoyed it!!😊😊❤❤
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Bonjour mon ami ou mon amie
Je n’ai aucune raison de courir
La vie me donne le temps
Soit dans le sens du vent ou à contre courant
Mais je vais toujours devant moi
Même si parfois je piétine ou je vais à reculons
Mais je réussirais et traverserais ce pont de L’avenir
Pour finalement arriver chez toi
Je te souhaite une agréable journée
Gros bisous d’amitié
Bernard
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Nice poem 😉
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Thank you 😀😀
Hope everything is going well with you, its been a long time🌼🌼
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I am doing well i hope you to 🙂
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Yes thank you😊😊
Its raining here, the days just got even better!!
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